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Media Folio Drafts
cmos 
8/8/08 7:53:38 PM
Overlord

Hiya! I thought I'd share my progress on my Yr 12 Media folio. My theme is sort the of rural landscape type. All pics taken with a Nikon D70s and 18-70 kit lens.

Comments and critiques appreciated!

1 - http://www.flickr.com/photos/charliestarke/2743909010/sizes/l/

2 - http://www.flickr.com/photos/charliestarke/2743909016/sizes/l/

3 - http://www.flickr.com/photos/charliestarke/2743909026/sizes/l/

4 - http://www.flickr.com/photos/charliestarke/2743909036/sizes/l/

5 - http://www.flickr.com/photos/charliestarke/2743945278/sizes/l/

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Mademan 
8/8/08 8:18:59 PM
Disciple
2 and 3 are excellent, 1 and 4 are quit decent too. I would have moved closer for number 1 though, and shot lower down to show the fence more (it's a bit cramped against the horizon). Number 4 I would have used a tele lens from further back and/or a wider apeture to get the whole road in focus. Number 5 is a bit of a weak link, i think you need to crop it closer, and position the light in the sky directly behind the tree.

Overall though, excellent stuff.

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Athiril 
8/8/08 9:24:26 PM
Titan

I like 1 the best.

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cmos 
12/8/08 4:44:08 PM
Overlord

Thanks for the feedback..yeah, I think 5 needs a bit more work.

Just a question..I saw my flickr page on my sisters computer and they are straight B&W instead of having a golden tint that I can see on my computer...what are you guys seeing them as?

Maybe my screen needs calibrating...

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Frizzl 
12/8/08 5:58:47 PM
Titan

Quote by cmos
Thanks for the feedback..yeah, I think 5 needs a bit more work.

Just a question..I saw my flickr page on my sisters computer and they are straight B&W instead of having a golden tint that I can see on my computer...what are you guys seeing them as?

Maybe my screen needs calibrating...



B&W here, 4 is probably my least favourite, I quite like 5 though... but 1 is a clear favourite :)

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Athiril 
12/8/08 6:04:46 PM
Titan

Examined in photoshop, should be "golden" tint, as the RGB values are not indentical at each pixel, therefore not greyscale, just monochromatic in nature.

There is more R and G than B, ill look more after dinner.

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The Tick 
12/8/08 9:15:03 PM
Hero
Titan


Loving 2 - that is something I would display personally. Something about that really resonates with me.

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LordBug 
13/8/08 5:20:37 PM
Immortal

1 - Really like. Agree with Mademan though, a bit tighter a shot would be good.

2 & 3 - Very nice.

4 - I'm with Mademan again, a better DoF would've helped. I also feel that getting the sky exposed properly would've been nice too, but that would require exposure stacking.

5 - Really good, though the really dark cloud to the right steals away from the silhouette a bit (Though that could in part be this monitor, what I'd give to be able to afford a monitor calibration device). Would've been good for the silhouette challenge ;)

Thanks for sharing :)

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